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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Kiss

    very nice poem. The imagery was very good kept me wanting to read more though in some lines i see some unneeded words, repeated words. other than that great.

    Mar 12, 2008


Remember when dad's shoulders were the highest place on earth and your mom was your hero? Race issues were about who ran the fastest, war was only a car game. The most pain you felt was when you skinned your knees, and good byes only meant tomorrow? And we couldn't wait to grow up.
— Unknown